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Score: 8
Cooking Sama

"No way that happened..."

submission: Cooking Sama
date: June 19, 2009

That was cute and fun, even the silly bloody stuff was lighthearted but WOW! That ending... NOT FOR CHILDREN!

It was good though, beautiful artwork.

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Score: 8
Cat Face ep.10

"Great!"

submission: Cat Face ep.10
date: April 22, 2009

Wonderful work as usual, but how do you whip these out so quickly, you guys are crazy fast!

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Score: 10
ParodyRangersTheMovie P.2

"Omg Power Rangers Ninja Movie"

date: March 26, 2009

That is so awesome I remember having that movie when I was younger, I watched it a lot. Them being ninjas was also so random, and those Naruto costumes to signify their "ninjaness" was too good.

Great.

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Score: 9
demoreel V2: Sand edition

"Yes."

date: February 27, 2009

I would hire you.

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Score: 4
-Particle Man-

"Tiny Toons"

submission: -Particle Man-
date: January 23, 2009

Nuff' said. This brought back so much memory of that episode of Tiny Toons, you know the one. If you've heard this song before thats probably where you've heard it. I will still never know what that song is really about. You depicted the lyrics perfectly, and it made 0 sense.

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Score: 7
Achievement Unlocked

"WOO!"

date: January 20, 2009

I beat it... Idk why I bothered, but at some point I felt the urge to get 100%

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Score: 6
The Last Fight

"Real Review"

submission: The Last Fight
date: January 20, 2009

I am going to give you a real review, not just give you mindless 10s or bash you to hell.

Art- The art style was very nice. The drawing was simple yet has a graphic flare to them that I feel would appeal to many, including myself. You made good use of the Flash brush to fill in darkness, and make some shadows.

Animation- The animation I felt was a bit lacking. Too many still areas. A good rule of thumb in animation is that there should always be something moving. You did well in your beginning stills with the "wind" effect, but that should be done throughout. Whenever a still shot comes up you should be cycleing the still 3 or so times. This applies most in your kind of rough looking, brush, graphical style. The animation on the moving parts was also very limited. When someone is performing an axction, it should not be just a still of them moving through the screen. Need anticipation and follow through.

Sound- The music choice was great, but the sound itself was scratchy. I don't think it was my speakers because nothing else sounded like that, just this piece. See if you can fix those issues for the future. Once again, good call on music selection.

Story- The atory was just a same old same old rehash of things done millions of times before. This is not all bad if you are focusing on making an action packed piece, with lots of fast cuts and a focus on animation quality, but the animation quality in this piece was not high enough to warrant such a cliched story. You need to grab the viewer's attention, and hold it there for the duration of the piece, be it through riveting storyline and/OR just pure awesomness, or else the viewer gets bored. This didn't quite have the pure awesomeness needed to skimp on the story. Music helps, but it can only go so far.

Overall- Decent piece. You certainly have potential. You have a nice grasp of shot composition and keeping the shots fresh. The story could be disregareded if the animation were amazing, but it wasn't. The sound quality was low also. The art was very nice though, at least in my opinion and stylistic preference.

6/10

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Score: 9
Aether

"Puzzles?!"

submission: Aether
date: December 5, 2008

I didn't even know there were puzzles until about 20 - 30 minutes of playing around. Just that experience was enough to be worth my time to play this game. It takes a bit to figure out that you need to go to space, then you float around for a while until you realzie those marks are planets, but once you get the hang of going to gravitational pullsa nd such you can have a lot of fun.

The music worked wonderfully and the artwork was beautiful. Very enjoyable game.

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Score: 6
Shirt N' Pants

"Voteing on what?"

submission: Shirt N' Pants
date: November 28, 2008

This would be much easier to write if I actually knew what exactly I was supposed to be reviewing in a review. In terms of animation quality, this was great, the actions were very thorough, good aniticipation and follow through. There was not much too it though. Just 2 tiny short anims. There was not really any sound to critique either. I guess you get a 6, cause the animating was awesome.

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Score: 8
Retardo and the IronGolem

"Kids site?"

date: November 20, 2008

I don't think this is for a kids site... Blood, sexual references, RETARDO!

Yae not for kids, great either way though.

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